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Look Hear

Exploration of an aroma's attraction,
eye's yearning for a captured prey.
Examined blinks of adoration,
followed by a breathless bondage.
Lashes batting at a hair tossed seduction,
earned stares of a shared want.
Piercing blue into equal orbs,
unspoken words heard by dancing pupils.
Desire united by a common thread,
"Sell me your soul."
A trail of glances that return for more,
"Can you not see I cannot be bought?"
Taken!

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  • michael thomas gold member
    July 15, 2008
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    nicely done. good work.


  • Riftkin gold member
    June 26, 2008
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    I cannot be bought
    not even for my soul

    this is great dear poet.
    hope to read more

    Riftkin