Inviting you into my heart
starting with a soft kiss
Finishing with joining of souls
Author notes
Prompt: Invitation
A contest entry
- Quickie-PIF-Prompt-10x15 words by Cannonsfire.
900 points, ended June 26, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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How romantic and full of a feeling of deeper love...this is an invitation of a life time..
what a wonderful take on the prompt...
Love,
mystic -
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Thank you
Thank you so much is that an acceptence
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BEAUTIFUL
The invitation of a life time...into my heart...sighs...finishing with joining of our souls...just breath taking thank you for sharing
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Thank you
Thank you so much Just a perfect prompt to work with and inspire me
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awww, this is so lovely, i really like this
wonderful write, and good luck daddy
stephanie
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Thank you
Thank you so much sweethart. You are the best daughter
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ooooooooooo lets merge our souls...... love this... thanks for sharing and good luck in contest.....!
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Thank you
Thank you, merging sounds fun
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Ooh brother!!! lol.. what an invitation!!!lol.. you did a great job with the prompt.. it's very sweet and romantic!!! Best of luck!!
Angel
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Thank you
Thank you my beautiful sister
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Soft and quite beautiful. Love, C
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Thank you
Thank you so much
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