vanishing into infinity's lap
to bring back eternity's sap
oh! still there, decorating the mind and the sky
A contest entry
- RAINBOW by Pisces rainbow.
1400 points, ended June 26, 2008, 15 entries
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this beautiful work my dear friend.. i truly enjoyed reading it
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interesting very cute good luck in the contest
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The Depth
In the lap,
the sap
reflects the deep (infinity). -
Lovely Poem
You have penned a lovely poem with great imagery. You say so much in only a few words. Not a easy task but you did it quite well.
You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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I LIKE THE DEPT HERE
GOING BEYOND THE OUTER SIGHT
RAINBOWS IN THE SKY ARE SO LOVELY
BUT WE ONLY NEED TO CLOSE OUR EYES
THE PROMISE IS ALWAYS THERE
WITHIN US
VERY LOVELY
THANK YOU FOR YOUR ENTRY
PLEASE DON'T RELY TO MY COMMENT
TO KEEP THE CONTEST ANONYMOUS
GOD BLESS..
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