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Five words

Devastating memories erode my soul...

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Just memories from my past coming with the new day...... yay me...

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  • CatQueen248
    August 29, 2008
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    Wow, that's all I can say. You nailed it. Congratulations on the gold.


  • HeavensDaughter
    June 28, 2008
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    Very powerful words. Congratulations on the gold!


  • SuicidalLover
    June 28, 2008

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    Aw...sweetie...I'm here Funny how this played everyday though huh? A great write hun. It did deserve the gold.
    ~Kystal Angel


  • marlene47 silver member
    June 28, 2008

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    What a beautiful presentation! That's the tragedy of some memories that you get to revisit them... this is so aptly expressed as eroding the soul - although if it's creating gems like this I's say it's fine shape despite the sadness.
    Congratulations on the gold.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    June 28, 2008
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    Wow!


  • Weltt
    June 27, 2008

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    Sorrowfully penned but beautifully composed.
    I'm here for you Jet.


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    June 26, 2008

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    oh hun hugs........ i feel these words... what shittyness they are but you expressed it sooo friggin well..... hugs my sis... hugs....! good luck in contest im sure its a winner at least it is in my eyes!


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    June 26, 2008
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    so dark and amazing, always here for you,
    hope your ok, love you,
    kitty xxx


  • Unsigned gold member
    June 26, 2008
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    mine to sis....beautiful


    Simon


  • Sweet Sorrow
    June 26, 2008

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    WOW!!! dark and sad.... I might borrow this line from you...winks...just joking. Being a dark writer I feel so much intense with this five words. Can be interpreted in one way or another. Best of luck


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    Aww this is so sad hun
    Wish you loads of smiles and happiness in your tomorrow's
    and good luck
    Julie x


  • LadyDementia gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    Aww hunni, memories can be horrid at times. You've expressed this beautifully tho


  • KayJay
    June 26, 2008
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    Beautifully put... and the image is perfect... Very touching... Well done...
    Ken


  • buffsab99
    June 26, 2008

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    Emotional

    Baby sister I know these memories are very difficult for you. Remember your big brother is here

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    I know the feeling everyday it seems that they always sneak up on us especially anniversary or certain smells I understand


  • luna-midnight gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    i know the feeling, but we got to accept those worth shit memmories lol *hugs* and i knwo people are here for you, and love you soo much *hugs*

    i really love that picture, and those words, devasting, i was always found of that word, it's so broken *hugs*
    wonderful job and thanks for entering, i hope you feel better, and things become easier and clearer, *hugs*
    stephanie

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