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Take Aim

Take aim,


Click...click...
bang!

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i just feel like i want to end my life sometimes, but a little voice always stops me

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  • marlene47 silver member
    June 28, 2008

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    Amen to the little voice!
    Chilling entry - must be some serious stuff happening!
    Congratulations on the HM.
    Marlene


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    Aww I agree with Adora there ~ I hope the voice just stays there permenantly
    Hope you feel better soon
    Claire x


  • adora
    June 27, 2008
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    I hope the little voice gets louder and really persistent.


  • Unsigned gold member
    June 26, 2008
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    ARGGGHHHHHH! YOU GOT ME!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    This is sad. I know the feeling though not wanting to be around in this world I for one am glad that you are here you have true strength much love


  • luna-midnight gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    well i'm glad that little voice stops you, because that would be terrible.
    i like how you used sounds in this write, it helps the imagination put more to it
    thanks for entering, and i hope things get better *hugs*
    stephanie

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