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Horizontal Desire

Practicing our advanced paces
As we go quickly, faster, slowly
We flow in pulsating poses

Penetrating my perfect painting
Your breath crushing my ribs
in this final rhythmic Rumba

Every fibre bleeding with desire

Pursuing the only possibility
As I pull you deeper in my skin
I feel you quiver from within

Perfection would be probable
No one standing in our way
For a moment you take me away

A vertical expression indeed

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  • Lady Eventide
    July 3, 2008

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    Oh, wow. Lovely...sensual...exhilariting read. Excellent word choice to describe this dance, too. Lovely...lovely...lovely! I can't say it enough!


  • Still single
    June 26, 2008

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    just sexy enough to leave you wanting more from it, more from you.
    Well done, i can see you've got dancing on your mind as well, nice amalgamation of the two desires.


    • Daizy21
      June 27, 2008
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      I promise you that when you dance the Rumba, you will always stop, wanting more...thanks for your comment!


  • In Too Deep1
    June 26, 2008
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    Beautifully penned and sensually erotic. A most enjoyable read to awaken to. tanks for sharing