Bones ache mind a blurr
Feelings hurt broken hearted
Loving you is all I know
Author notes
Prompt: Thicker than water
A contest entry
- another one of mine by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended June 26, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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How beautifully deep... x
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ooo this is really pretty!!!!!!!
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Bubs,
One can feel the pain, and the love that you share in this one! I love this... You did a great job on this one!!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Thank you my dear Nyetta! Your compliments are taken with the warmth you meant to share. Don
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When loving someone is your world all you know they can hurt you and even break you but when the love is returned ......... you are living life. Your words pure and true flow freely and always goes both ways. Excellent take on the prompt...love is thicker Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you Mook for the wise and kind comment and compliments. What you say is so true. It would be a better world to live in if it was more wide spread. Don
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