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your hands

Missing image





Until the rain falls ~

I shall only be
the colour God intended
you to touch...

 

 

 

 

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  • Desire gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: your hands
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I was being shown word: mirage and like a hand reaching through a mirror-but a tall standing one- like the oval kind You can flip around- if that makes sense-
    Also being shown word: wallet and seeing one- Nowwwwwww
    for some reason getting reference to: credit card debt and hearing word: Mastercard- something about high finance charge-
    and hearing phrase: not worth the time to spend-
    something about 17 which sounds like 17 percent- interest-Not saying this is referring to You but after reading Your words- this is what I was getting-seeing- Interesting image of a bubble gum machine and reference to a penny- as if a penny machine~
    Hopefully that makes some sense
    Wonderful take on the prompt-
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    the colour God intended...
    Unique Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    June 26, 2008

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    wow now that is aawesome...... i like this alot..... great write.... i know my comments suck sorry... but i do like this... good luck inc ontest..!