Foretold events
turned into
sweet
nothings
victimized souls
~ freed ~
yesterdays promise
returns...
reawakening
spirits
Author notes
Prompt is the picture - 15 Words picture credit is photobucket.
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXII - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 29, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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WOW!! Terrific words small in mass but large in it's true message. You did an excellent job with this, to bad you came up short, sounded like a true winner to me.
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Thank You for Your Time~
Thank You for Your entry: Reborn
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I still counted 14 Words unfortunately- Sorry-wish I could award a Trophy or HM but this contest calls for 15 Words which I imagine You would understand decision made~
but I would Love to see this in one of my pre-write contests
I'm Honored to have read and inhaled- I was being shown a globe- hearing word: orb~ Nowwwwwwwww I am being shown a mystical store- and being directed to this orb I am hearing it being called-
Reference to second shelf- on sale- Also for some reason being shown a wand- now hearing reference to six inches- and seeing a crystal at the tip- citrine- silver wire wrapped
three jewels on the side- also reference to crown chakra-sacral- throat- as if representing these areas-hearing word: simultaneous and also word: Healing- Interestingly enough the wood of the wand I am being told- bark of rosewood-
Hopefully that makes some sense
Wonderful take on the prompt-
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
yesterdays promise returns...
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Oh My~
I was reading Your words and kept counting 14 Words for some reason and this contest calls for 15 Words
Now I am not finding reawakening in the dictionary online as one word but on Google it is showing as one word- Yay-so with that I am still counting 14-
I will be reading the other entries and always come back for a final read- Hopefully You will have corrected to reflect 15 Words I'll be back
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i love this poem and i love the wonderful picture you have used, some people cry rainbow tears, keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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hope + rainbows = my friend kicking butt with the prompt
well done hun!!!!!
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I had to take a deep breath after reading this as I lost my breath ... absolutely beautiful poem hun!
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beautifuly done
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