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My Angels

It is dark,
cold,
black.
I am lying down,
hopeless.
I am outside my soul.
I see you,
radiant,
beautiful,
fearless.
You are my savorier.
I take your hand,
i kiss your cheek.
You are my breath,
my sweet angels.
From womb to arms
you are my heart,
my life,
my loves.


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  • Cyanide Milkshake
    July 3, 2008
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    Very nicely written. It was so soft. The colour kinda hurts my eyes though XD


  • AnanCat
    June 26, 2008
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    thats nice but i think it needs some music in it.