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A Letter

Dear Love,

It was nice to meet you for the second time
Thank you for introducing me to her
She's much more beautiful than the first
We hit it off right away
8 months later, I'm more in love
It feels like she's ridding me from her soul
I don't know what to do
Will you help me?
You're experienced with this stuff
My chest pains are heavy, how do you fix it?
Last time you told me only she can heal me
I still believe it; I love her, Love
YOU couldn't even understand how much
Nor could your messenger boy, Cupid
That's okay, I'm still learning
Just want her to come home, soon
I miss her, Love; feel so alone
Can you please bring her back?
That's all I ask; nothing else
What ever your price or fee; I'll pay it
Sacrifice is nothing, monetary or other
I know she still remembers me through you
Please, Love...this is all I need
For her and I to create your spawn eternally
I appreciate your help; please do what you can...


Sincerest friend,






hardeepb

Author notes

I wrote a letter to Love...wondering if they'll ever get it and heed my call...

One of my more unique pieces...I hope it touches each and every one of you...I cried just writing it...

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  • Kiss the girl--x
    August 6, 2008

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    'Dear Love,

    It was nice to meet you for the second time
    Thank you for introducing me to her
    She's much more beautiful than the first'

    That beginning was so unique, writing to love as if to a person, thats such a brilliant idea, and it really turned out well.

    great write [=
    ♥


  • sensualbutterfly
    July 22, 2008
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    That is unique...writting a letter to love. Outstanding work. It really touched my heart. Thank you


  • Sound of Madness
    July 9, 2008

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    This is a very cute write. I hope your love appreciated it, or at least heeded you call. Thanks for entering my contest. I wish you much luck.


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 29, 2008

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    Wow this is very well written. my favorite part was when you said "My chest pains are heavy, how do you fix it? Last time you told me only she can heal me I still believe it; I love her, Love YOU couldn't even understand how much Nor could your messenger boy, Cupid That's okay, I'm still learning" thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck. ..<3.. Shelly

  • limechic
    June 26, 2008

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    this is a very touching poem...definitely unique...writing to love as if it were a person. beautiful =) it's a very heartfelt poem...but dont cry!!

    i loved reading this one =)


  • ProudMomma
    June 26, 2008

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    VERY TOUCHED BEYOND BELIEF LOVE WILL ANSWER YOUR CALL. YOU DESERVE IT! I LOVE THIS PIECE SO MUCH. YOU TOLD ME NOT TO CRY BUT I DID! WOW! Keep on penning hon!

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