lost in the past
falling into the future,
stuck here,
silent.
is this how life should feel.
my mind scatters,
thoughts of unspoken you.
i gasp for air,
my insides tear.
i close my eyes,
and remember,
i am stuck here.
lying in the past,
crying in the future,
forever frozen.
A contest entry
- don't tell me goodbye. by Sun-shiney.
300 points, ended June 30, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I really like this, and can feel the words inside.thanks for sharing this with us here and for joining the site.
keep up the writing, and good luck in this contest.
cheers
Grey
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