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Staring At A Girl

I wish this wasn’t real
That you were here

You’re lost
Numb
And empty
You lost your way
You’ve given up

You’re still here
In an empty shell
Losing hope
Waiting
And waiting
For something
To point you on your way
But there’s nothing

You’re looking for a clue
That long past you by
It told you to push through
To find some strength
And go on your way

You ignored it
Just gave up
And now I sit here
Staring at a girl
I used to know
That long ago gave up
Decided not to try
To me...
It’s like you’ve died

Author notes

This is written like the person who's saying this is looking in a mirror... just to clarify. I think it's pretty self explanatory.

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  • Kryptonite
    June 29, 2008
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    HEY ASH!

    I love this write its very good! i luv ya girly keep up the awesome work! I miss you