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Infliction

Passionate, I kiss your lips
Feelings like fire
Burning
At the heat of your fingertips

Enchanted, I sing your praise
Melodys carress
Vibrato
At your angelic phrase

Abstractly, I comprehend
An affliction despairs
Bleeding
Not just a dream to mend

Allayed, I bow and blister
Such cancer
Spreading
You're not my assignor




Author notes

im talking about an incident and realizing hes not my angel at the end and that its not just a nightmare

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  • SerenityNChains gold member
    July 31, 2008
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    Cute, sweet and delicate. Thanks for this wonderful entry.

    Serenity


  • greyhaime
    June 26, 2008

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    welcome to allpoetry

    this is good, I liked the slight double meaning in it. well said. all the way around. thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest.
    cheers
    Grey
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