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Hurry Up

We've been down this road before
Can we only be friends?
Is it to much to ask for more?

I trust your completely
But should I trust you with my heart
We've been friends for so long
I know you and all your faults
But are we ment to be?

This night I feel closer to you then ever before
But is it to much to ask for more?
We have this forever lasting friendship
Would it be greed to want a you and me?


Too much thinking not enough just feeling
Hurry up and kiss me before I think some more
I want more, I want your love to be for me
So please, hurry up and kiss me

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  • sherrilyn1999
    June 26, 2008

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    This really captures that insecurity we feel early in a relationship--something that, over time and learning one another, goes away (and by time, I mean years). I remember what that felt like, trying so hard not to put pressure, but really needing to know if I was going to get hurt. Thank you for helping me remember that through your poem.