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seduce and conquer

streetlights glaring in its eyes
flying down the sidewalk in bits and legs

black mucus body following mine,
surrounding my mind with subtle hymns

stroke me sing,
bring me back to nothing

giving in to its persuasion,
i want nothing else.. nothing else..

blending thoughts to shooting wall
as i lean indefinitely

catch each strand
in your willing hands

and feel

stroke the female ellipse
bring your shy twist to decieve

and its eyes, eyes infecting
my insides, those black eyes..

tear it apart to molecules
watch it spread across my skin

like plastic wrap
mother nature provide me none

my lungs to fall on asphalt
consumed by a black mucus body

no longer following me
no one can see

symptoms being
high, numb

defeated.


Author notes

lets be the good sports.

remains still here, smiling and trying to subdue, but i feel defeated, with no idea why.

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  • kinfolkn
    June 27, 2008

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    your writing is becoming more sexy with each poem. Though this feeling of numbness and of defeat is not usually something expressed this well and with good placement and flow of language. Like this poem a lot. keep writing please cus im really diggin your art