Behind veil of glitters
shadows waltz
of abandoned faith
False dreams
prevails...
to eternal hell
Author notes
Prompt: Picture Prompt & Money is the root of all that kills-
by Everclear- I Will Buy You a New Life
song: YouTube
Image Credit: Photobucket
I think this applies to both prompts
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXII - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 29, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: In The Ecstasy of Submission
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I was being shown the line...of abandoned faith for some reason as if stumped on that phrase- for some reason it felt like the word of was either meant to be something else like 'on' or 'over'...just wanted to toss that Your way for review Nowwwwwwww when I read again- I kept getting a scene from The End of Days- where Lucifer is urinating on the sidewalk- I had seen this image before in another person's piece quite sometime ago- and there was an underlining message- though the other person's message was slightly different-
the urine trail basically went underneath a van and blew it up- but the man in the van was given a choice to help the Dark and live (under false promises)
Also being shown what looks like a Chinese stone lion statue-
Hopefully that makes sense
Wonderful take on the prompt-
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
False dreams prevails...
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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I agree that this goes well with both promps. A very nicely written piece of poetry. Good luck to you in the contest.
Kelli -
Wonderful take on the prompt. You have a beautiful way with words. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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