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Strength to Carry On

I've lived the past few years in fear
Always thinking that person is near.
I feel marked and scarred, even broken.
That horrendous act remains unspoken.
Sometimes I feel like I can't go on,
As if I'm nothing but a useless pawn.
But that was before you entered my life,
When it was filled with internal strife.
Now its easier with you by my side,
No longer in the shadows do I have to hide.
Although I'm still scared and always will be,
I find the strength to carry on with your love to guide me.

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This is about something that happened to me almost four years ago and the only thing keeping me going is my girl alyx, lexicats, and her support

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  • Cyanide Milkshake
    June 30, 2008
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    Lovely, I feel the strength you draw from her


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    June 29, 2008

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    This is poem full of sadness and love. It seems as though you have found a safe place in your life. Great job on the poem.


  • cherrybabe16
    June 25, 2008

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    Love it!

    I personally think this poem is a very easy read because you can catch the direction it's going in easily. There wasn't anythign I didn't like honestly.