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Sparkling Rainbows

Sparkling rainbows dance
before my eyes as I wonder
where is that pot of gold?

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  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    August 14, 2008
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    Nice!

    Could be taken in SO many ways...
    Lovin' it!


  • Desire gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Sparkling Rainbows
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I was being shown a lipstick~ and wild as it may sound- that movie with Margaux Hemingway...
    Now for some reason I am being shown a sewer system and what looks like a gator, actually being given word: crocodile~ whether an underlining message with that or a metaphor ...I was seeing that image- Also strange as it sounds, being given the words: color blind- but also word: compliment-
    Also being given what sounds like 1873- feels like a year and seeing a woman in that period of dress-
    Nowwwwwwwwwwww also getting words: slave trader-
    and word: emancipation- abolitionist
    Hopefully that makes some sense
    Wonderful take on the prompt-
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    Sparkling rainbows dance...
    Unique Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Angelflower
    June 28, 2008

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    I loved this..It flowed really well and the ending question made me smile.. Lol. You did a wonderful job.. Best of luck..

    Angel