Eyes locked
in stained glass glances
lost keys
meant to open doors
into deeper meanings.
Author notes
15 words
picture prompt
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXII - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 29, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I was being shown the word: tortilla and shown a tortilla also was getting word: flatbread- and looks like a reference to homemade salsa- also was getting word: chiles
Now looks like a hand rubbing mist from a shower stall-whether metaphor or symbolism-
After reading again I was being shown phrase: all beef patty Also was getting word: Hostess- nowwwwww looks like I was being shown a cupcake- with the white stripe on top- but then it appears like a zinger~
Nudged to mention reference to word: Men- like they are all not in the same category- lumped together-it is like there are actually a few...few who do not fit the *norm* for some reason nudged to mention that and word: Library- also word: Beacon- as if reference to Your energy~ I was trying to decipher words that flashed
Hopefully that makes some sense
Wonderful take on the prompt-
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
in stained glass glances...
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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