I'm no pot
of gold
but I will
savor the
flavor
of your tear
rainbow.
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A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXII - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 29, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: True colors
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I was being shown a bag of candy but not the name- and for some reason getting phrase: freshness guaranteed whether metaphor or symbolism-
Getting a reference to Florida- and for some reason word: Allstate Nowwwwwwwwww after I read Your piece again I was seeing word: Foreclosure and looks like a condo- and there's a reference to a bank- and word: renig-
I'm getting phrase: read between the dotted lines- feels like a disclaimer or something in a contract not for Your benefit- as if another is trying to recoup losses for I was getting words: recoup losses-
Hopefully that makes some sense
Wonderful take on the prompt-
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
...but will savor the flavor...
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Nice Visual....
Goes very well with the photo...once again you release your thoughts with so few words...me I always write a book!!!..smile...very good once again!!!~~Toni~~
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All the colours of the rainbow filling the sky making people look up and sigh....never found that pot of gold they say is at rainbows end so dont bother looking anymore just admire the view. Great take on the prompt picture is a good one to tickle the muse. Good luck in the contest.
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Oo. Oh. My. Gawd. I do not know why, but this is making me giggle. Perhaps because it's midnight? I dunno. But great job with this piece and good luck in the competition.
-Les
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