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Lady of the night.

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Lady of the night

over slept,

daylight exposes

her promiscuity

in red killer heels.

Heel that are well worn

to the job of vice,

lowlessness and lack of esteem.

Her umbrella a shield

from the downpour of ready cool

her family may get.

Who are we to cast judgement

on a person who dewlls in

the shopfront corners

of her mind?

Frown upon your

own deficiency of

wanting compassion,

take a picture of yourself

and exploit that as you have

the lady of the night.

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Secrets. by *Ursylla

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  • IanG silver member
    June 28

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    Excellent

    "take a picture of yourself and exploit that as you have the lady of the night." This is a very clever exposure of the hypocracy we are all guilty of. We judge by externals without taking into account the difficult paths people may have trod, or the cry of their heart for a life better than that served up to them.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    June 27

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    Self-examination

    is a deep well in our human reality... good luck in the contest!!!


  • Pure Thought silver member
    June 26
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    Far be it from me to cast the first stone.
    Well put, well put indeed.


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    June 25
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    C


  • Sagerider
    June 25

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    I Love it.

    Great write, it seems we are always in such a hurry to judge others. I loved how you asked them to look at themselves.

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