Choice
Chance
- Purposely fed Ignorance
Escape
Illusion
- Flowing from you
Possesion
Bars
- your hospital bed
Author notes
PICTURE
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXII - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 29, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
say what you will
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: ...meth...
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I was being shown a scene from the movie: Gothika- and it was when she was in solitary- also being shown the scene when she was driving down the road and stops in front of a woman who catches on fire I believe
and I am being shown wrists restrained- and IV present-
but the liquid is a placebo- for some reason...
I'm hearing phrase: Delusions of Grandeur- and seeing a scene in The Titanic- where Jack says: I'm King of the world after reading Your words again- I'm seeing one of the deformed nurses from the movie Silent Hill- for some strange reason whether metaphor or symbolism
Hopefully that makes some sense
Wonderful take on the prompt~
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
- purposely fed Ignorance
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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This was.. A different take.. And a different form, took me a few reads to get it. But good job and good luck in the contest.
-Les -
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- Les
Thanks for taking the time to read this.
It's far from my best.
This write came from yesterday's melt down.
my ex. fiance over dosed on meth...and I wasn't sure how to write about it..
so I wrote down images and certain words from what I was told...
Once again,
thanks.
~*SL*~
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