Snow skin ravaged,
concealed within shrouded hearts.
As Angelica stoops forsaken,
in heartbreak’s austere dream.
Author notes
Please let the picture stir Your rue...
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15 Words only
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXI - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 29, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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well done. captures a moment and delivers crisp imagery
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Welcome Back Again~ Yay!
Magnificent
Your piece qualifies and elated to see You back
Best wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Fallen Angel
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I kept seeing what appears to be a Greyhound bus and hearing what sounds like Colorado-
Strange as it sounds, I am being shown what looks like a loaf of bread being sliced as if breaking of bread with friends- Hearing words: the Feminine mystique
For some reason I am being shown a barking rottweiler and a sitting doberman pincher Whether metaphor or symbolism- After reading I was seeing the sun and moon eclipse
Hopefully this makes some sense
Wonderful take on the prompt~
Powerful message and images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
...in heartbreak's austere dream.
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Beautiful imagery and very intense emotion. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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