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fade to black

As he sits by the fire in his heart,
he sips from the ice cold in his eyes,
tapping his fingers to the sound of his veins.

He holds his anger in sight....
as he leaves nothing behind,
haunted by his past,scarred by his future
the world engulfs him in irony.

He holds himself at needle point....
threatening the loneliness he feels with pain
daring the world to leave him alone...
if only for just one night.

He believes that life is made up;
of what he is used to....
suffocating on his own breath,
he wonders what it would be like to dream,
so he can escape if only for a moment.

Lost inside himself he diminishes
as distorted images of how life should be;
recognize him from afar......
leaving him yet one more time ,
resurrected and back to nothing special.

Time is as it should be....
his enemy, yet his only friend
as he collects himself in fragments...
of memories and broken moments of now.

 

Knowing that his life is not his own,

yet he fights to stay alive ,

as his irony coddles his pain....

he fades to black .....

waiting for the light to find his soul intact.

Author notes

I am not really sure where this came from, I just started writing it ....it was not written about any one oranything imparticular.

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  • i forgot these too.. Shley is right... it must be him but there is always a possibility that it could be someone else anyway i wonder what made you think to write about him... a recent encounter maybe...

    • yeah

      You never know especially in my case..lol,
      but it is prolly about Joe..lol, thnx for leaving commenting!
  • good.. i wonder if it is about someone you know..
  • forgot these

  • After reading your authors note, I decided to look for clues as to where this poem came from...and I think it has to do with Joe (you know who I'm talking about). Especially "He holds himself at needle point"--he's looking for a quick fix always....because he believes "life is made up". "he wonders what it would be like to dream"--this line says how he is different from normal people who have the luxury of dreams. the last stanza reinforces my thoughts on who it is. im not sure how, but it makes me sure that what i said is where you derived the inspiration for this poem
    • yeah

      I think u are right, it is prolly about Joe....it sounds just like him. Thanks for bringing that to my attention....
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