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Leave Behind

Now a snake's heart is revealed,
Now the poison has been found.
A devil who was well concealed,
and a dream thrust to the ground.

Talk!  Why are you trying to break me now?
can't you leave me alone?
But sir, tell me this true tell me how,
can you come back like you're home?

Still you can not look at me in the eye.
You say you are to marry
so why waist time with the past which died?
Hurry boy, do not tarry.

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  • Frodofan silver member
    June 25

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    Okay, not so great. You should look it over.

    Who is this about (if anyone)? Very weird. Looks like it's been a rather bizarre day for you...