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[ Baby, ]

Baby,
You can cry Rainbows all you want-

but I'll still bleed in Technicolor romance.

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  • Desire gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: [ Baby ]
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I was being shown Mickey Mouse for some reason but the black and white Mickey Mouse from the early days and seeing Goofy-
    Now also being shown Marionettes and also a reel of film as if playing- on a projector from the 20's- and seeing a young starlette like in flapper attire-
    Hopefully that makes some sense
    Wonderful take on the prompt-
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    ...I'll still bleed in Technicolor romance.
    Unique Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~



  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    June 25, 2008

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    awwwwwwwwwww this is an awesome write..... great write... thanks for sharin this and goood luck in contest.....!