our love was but a beauty,
perfect in every way.
our words to each other,
silk, and flow on my page.
she was my addiction,
as rhyme to the common poet.
my soul bled with every day she wasn't there
her death was a suprise to everyone
i was left mesmorized,trapped within myself
the puzzle of life was scrambled, and pieces lost
eventually the cost of my death and the worth of her voice,
eclipsed each other til the decision was made
I kill myself to feel her skin,
she was my rose
and now we are together again
-FIN-
A contest entry
- don't tell me goodbye. by Sun-shiney.
300 points, ended June 30, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Welcome To all poetry
Hi SuJ3f3Thomas
This is an excellent poem
Losing someone we love is one of the worst pains on earth Good luck to you in the contest
Please keep writing, reading and commenting
Barbara
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welcome to allpoetry
the sadness and longing in this is real and it heartens the soul. well done on this and thank you for sharing and for joining the site,keep writing.
cheers
Grey
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