This inferno can't burn me
The towers of ice can't freeze me
No matter how dark the darkness falls
My heart cannot be blackened
Nor evaporated by the blazing sun
No matter how thick the smogs grow
They can't sufficate me
Strong currents can't sway me
The stacked boulders can't stop me
Your daggers can't pierce me
And your words can't scar me
However strong your ax swings
It can't break me in two
Or however swift your arrows soar
They can't wound me in the least
No matter how hard you try
You can never hurt me
But with a pivot of your heel...
You can kill me.
Author notes
Just something quick I wrote that I thought I'd enter. You did say we could enter twice, right? Feel free to DQ me if I'm wrong. The title is supposed to have multiple meanings...
A contest entry
- People under 14--Be Deep! by myusikah.
450 points, ended June 30, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I see. This is awesomeness! I like the hidden meanings, the emotion. Yes, this is deep. Emotion, imagery, basically good poetry! Good luck!
-->pia♫♪
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