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Entranced

Dreams cascade
  from deepest thoughts,
illuminating visions of endless love
                  held in this solitary moment.

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pic prompt from Photobucket, 15 words only

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  • Desire gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Entranced
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I was being shown words: spaghetti and seeing a plate of it also with meatballs which looked like they were homemade- for some reason getting phrase: Like Momma used to make- and hearing reference to rigano reggiano-
    Also after reading Your words I kept seeing what looks like Olive Garden- and being shown a shrimp dish in a creamy sauce For some reason - hearing word: Rome- but hearing reference to Milan
    Hopefully that makes some sense
    Wonderful take on the prompt-
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    ...held in this solitary moment.
    Unique Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    Ahhh endless love... so illusive!! But something we can dream about right? Says a lot in those 15 words hun!


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      June 27, 2008
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      Yep, dreaming is all I can do right now. But dream I do!! One day our prince will come...screw the prince, I'll take a good ol' country guy!! lol


  • StarEyes
    June 26, 2008

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    Yep, that is the feeling... This is great Sis! I can relate to this...

    Great take on the prompt!

    Best of luck to you in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

    • Carolina Moon gold member
      June 26, 2008
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      Yep, most can relate I think, but I know not what I write about endless love? My thoughts were merely jesting lol
      You're so sweet Nettie, thank you dear.
      and love
      Linda


      • StarEyes
        June 26, 2008
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        I know those feelings well, And well, it is timeless, and wonderful!


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    June 25, 2008

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    wow what a write.... great job of penning here but you always do anyway thanks for sharing this and goooood luck in contest!!!!!!!!!

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