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One Dream

Visionary quest
Left illusions
Shimmering softly
Beneath ripples wavering
A distant dream revealing
Lost sunsets

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A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: One Dream
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I was being shown a palette- but the colors are like concrete white- and hues of the same color- I'm being shown a sea shore- but for some reason reference to the tide being blood red- then seeing sand that is like charcoal black Then getting words: volcanic ash...For some reason getting reference to Maui- and seeing a shark-
    hearing words: reef shark-
    Strange as it may sound getting words: Macaroni and cheese
    Hopefully that makes some sense
    Wonderful take on the prompt-
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    These words grabbed and pulled~
    A distant dream revealing...
    Unique Voice spoken~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Livingemptyspaces
    June 25, 2008

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    Oooh, this was really.. I don't know, the words you used make me wish you had more words.. That you could expand this. Great job with this piece.. and good luck in the contest.

    -Les