The amazing sparkle in your eyes
can completely mesmerize
with the element of utter surprise...
Author notes
prompt: Money is the root of all that kills.
People think it solves all, but can so easily tear things apart.
All that glitters is not gold.
In a list
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXII - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 29, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: All that glitters...
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I was being shown for some reason the words: Peek a Boo-
but also the mask used in the movie- Scream- I'm seeing that face and reference to things are not what they seem~ phrase: Know the elements- (as if referencing surprise)
Also after reading Your piece again, I'm being shown the game Monopoly- and also word: asterisk as if symbolism- Now also being given word: Boardwalk-
Hopefully that makes some sense
Magnificent take on the prompt-
Powerful images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
...with the element of utter surprise
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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This is such a wonderful take on the prompt.. Though just a thought, maybe you should put the option that you choose in your Authors Notes?
just s suggestion though.. You did a great job.. I wish you the best of luck..
Angel
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Thanks I added the prompt and an a.n.
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I love the fact that this rhymed, plus the words that you used. Great take, though literal, still. Good luck in the contest.
-Les
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