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One Last Chance

You stood by me
It didn't matter what happened
You were always there
Holding my hand, telling me it's alright
Helping me up, when I would
All too often fall

No matter what I did
In your eyes, I could do no wrong
Hurting you, time and again
Yet you still loved me
This time, I'm here to stay, darling
And no longer will I hurt you

You say I don't have to ask
For another chance
Or say I'm sorry for hurting you
But I feel compelled to let you know
Those past experiences we've had
Shall no longer come to pass

Just let me love you
And I'll prove to you
Each day, for the rest of our lives
That I've changed, my love
You mean everything to me
You are my life, my love

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Written 9/25/05

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  • This poem is very much about me
    -recieves a slap-
    Or not ? Lol.
    Very good write hun.
    Powerful and beautifully crafted
    Well Done
    xxxxx


  • ASleepingPoppy
    July 22, 2008
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    beautiful!

    great great great, i loved it, its not dark its exceptionally emotional and true. good job


  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 3, 2008

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    So emotional. So brilliant. I loved the poem. Such a great write, nice flow. I hope to read more from you. Also, I can see you have talent.