The gun to my head is made up of all the things you said about me,
The shadows in the dark scream your name when I close my eyes,
How does it feel living now without me,
Are you even sorry for all those times you lied?,
Yesterday I said it was over,
So why dont you just say goodbye,
I'm not living in this hell you created for me,
I'm standing my ground this time,
You told me you loved me and you are sorry,
Oh how I wish this was true,
Hey what a funny story,
You told Her the same thing too,
I've given to many chances,
Now theres no going back,
Remember the happy times baby,
Then remember how you ruined that
Yesterday I said it was over,
So why dont you just say goodbye,
I'm not living in this hell you created for me,
I'm standing my ground this time,
I wish you could mean it when you say sorry,
I wish I could hate you,
It's just the same old story,
And I hate that I still Love You...
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This is an awesome poem. I know exactly how this feels. Only difference is I don't love Greg anymore. I hate him with a passion. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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wow very powerful almost like a song....great write thank u for entering u will def be considered.
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Thank you for the beautiful entry to my contest,
i really love the deep thoughts you have put into this wonderful poem
I love how you have that repetitiveness in there and I love the way you say at the end that you hate that you still love him, I kind of understand your feelings in this poem, thank you for sharing. As always keep up the wonderful writing, ~ Amy
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This us really good. I loved the part where you said "Yesterday I said it was over,
So why dont you just say goodbye,
I'm not living in this hell you created for me,
I'm standing my ground this time,"
it's well written, and something I can relate to... It's always hard to say goodbye...
Great write, keep it up!
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Thank You
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awww this is very sad so much emotion amazing flow I know you put your heart into this <3 good luck in the contest
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