the third stone sleeps
while rust and dust
settles
on the purple moon's
dark reign
Author notes
The silence of a falling star-
by Hank Williams- I'm So Lonesome I Could Cry
song: YouTube
In a list
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXI - by Desire.
700 points, ended June 29, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: resurrection
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I kept seeing the name: Orson Welles
Now for some reason I was being shown what looks like a thermometer- to take a person's temperature
and strange as it sounds was seeing Ironside- the actor who played that character I think his name is Raymond Burr-
Also seeing Maxwell Smart but the older version with Don Adams Oy~ for some reason I was also seeing show: Bewitched but the older one with Elizabeth Montgomery and looks like the show: Family Affair with Buffy and Jody...I'm nudged to mention for some reason: It is alright to reminisce in the past as long as one does not live in it
Hopefully this makes some sense
Wonderful take on the prompt~
Powerful message and images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
the third stone sleeps...
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Sighhh...Hank's still playin', way up yonder.
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What a great take on that song!
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Brilliant
just like you..
I always cry when I hear that song and this poem though only 15 words, brings the same emotion...
ALways making me sigh~
Lynda
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Excellent.
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What of the best fifteen word pieces I've ever read.
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What a read! You said a lot in only fifteen words! I love it!!
Best of luck in this contest!!
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