He's pulling you closer
You're feeling him
No
He's feeling you
Owning you
No
You're feeling him
Hard aganst you
Like a train to a body
No
Tracing him
Touching him
No
His eyes lie
Like cheap whores on the floor
No
You fake it
Grin & bear it
No
Your heart is beating
You into submission
No
You can taste it
Vial & thicker than blood
No
No it's not fair
No it's not right
No it's not what matters now
Author notes
I was reading Crank & listening to some song that I can't recall the name of.
My insperations.
A contest entry
- Without Rules by reckless abandon.
900 points, ended September 6, 2008, 113 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Yes....
Comments
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This is a really good poem, and the ending is probably the best part. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Very good jess, i like it. I havnt seen a poem like that ever, first for me! I kudo you for your uniekness.
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Yes and then no... wow.
"eyes like whores on the floor"--- this was a nice description. I thought this was simply wicked.
Im glad you managed to be inspired by something that allows you to write like this.
blessed be
-Blanche
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