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Days go by

Days go by
Each an everyday
It's tortue
The pain
Never seems to change

Days go by
When I don't stop thinking of you
Telling myself how things are different
Without you

Without you
I'm incomplete
I try to hide
What's so wrong inside

I'm digging into a hole
Full of emptiness
And unfullfilness

 

Days go by

And I'm getting weaker

I'm unable to think

I want to breath again

 

Days go by

When I don't miss you

I miss your smile

Your hair

Your clothes that you wear

Your perfume

The way you look

 

Days go by

When I wanna cry

When I feel so sad

Like it's my fault that you died

 

I know it's not true

But I miss every inch of you

I know it's not right

I want to hold you so tight

 

Days go by

And I don't want this to happen

I know I've done wrong

I'm finding my place in this world

In this world where I belong

 

Days go by

And I love you

And I miss you so much

I will never let you go

As days go by

Author notes

this is for my moms 3rd year anniversary coming up on 8/8/08

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  • Sheilasbabygal4life
    October 18

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    This was a very moving piece you have here. It was sad. This was sad. Very emotinal. Thank you for entering and best of luck too you in the contest.


  • starving4perfection
    October 9

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    aww wow thats soo sad...im sorry to hear that i truely am....:'(
    this piece touched my heart in so many ways its beautifully written...thank you so much for entering this poem and good luck! x


  • MrsJones
    July 4, 2008

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    Really beautiful poem, I'm so sorry for your loss. It flowed nicely and had a lot of good emotion to it, you did a great job of expressing yourself. Thank you for entering.


  • XxAngelOfPoisonxX
    June 30, 2008
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    wow this is a good poem....

    thanks for commenting on mine,


  • Beauty Of Silence
    June 28, 2008

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    AWW!

    this is so sad, it almost made me cry... tears are welled up in my eyes! i'm so sorry that your mom has passed away dear... a very deep and emotional write! don't blame yourself, for its not your fault... god just decided to end it! keep the faith alive, and dont let darkness take over your smile okay! keep penning kays!

    much much love,
    Ranji


  • Little Miss Mental
    June 26, 2008

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    oh, this is so sad...but in such a moving and beautiful way! I'm sorry about you mother, but good luck in my contest, and again...this was beautiful to read...

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