&welcome to the park where there's lots of games, and bubbles and fairies and where fireworks burst into sparkles. Where you're so high off the ground that nothing can hurt you, nothing can touch you here[you're protected by heart shaped bubbles]
&rainbows meet at the beginning of swings that can swing you in circles and take you as high as the clouds. and you can fly, but my love you can never fall. Nothing bad can happen here, nobody can touch you here.
All the drinks come with lemons and the fruits are divine, the people are oh so friendly, it's like heaven without the wings. You can laugh, you can play, you can do anything.
Technicolor vision saves you from seeing things as how you should, and you can go join the little girls who wear white dresses. They throw a tea party at 2 and it's meant for the gods.
This can all be your home, the rainbows, the limes, the butterflies, and the bubbles, they're here to protect you, to bring a smile to your face all you have to do is chose to stay in this state.
Author notes
so the thought behind this poem is depressing because i know what its about, but the poem itself isnt so hope you like it love :] ♥
A contest entry
- [cheer me up] by whiterabbit..
400 points, ended September 7, 2008, 36 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Cute
Hey........send me some of those heart shaped bubbles. That's a wonderful idea!
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Really good poem Dancing Marionette - I did enjoy this. When I first clicked on it and saw it in this form, I was a bit confused at what was going on, but that's just because I'm not used to poems in this format, but it was still great nonetheless. Well done. Good luck in the contest
best wishes as always
Autumn Whisper
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This was such a beautiful and creative poem. It really made me smile. Great write and Good Luck in the contest.
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Oops forgot to applaud
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Technicolor vision saves you from seeing things as how you should, and you can go join the little girls who wear white dresses. They throw a tea party at 2 and it's meant for the gods.
Darling this is amazing. It sure cheered ME up. I wish the whole world could be as beautiful as they way you write, and wrote this.
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my beautiful gorgeous lover! the title is absolutly adorable, no really. i smiled when i read it. and the imaginary behind this whole piece is amazing, so vibrant and colorfulllll.
Where you're so high off the ground that nothing can hurt you, nothing can touch you here[you're protected by heart shaped bubbles]
have any heart shaped bubbles that i can borrow so i dont get hurt?
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B
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I love this and I know what you mean about the thought behind it being depressing. I love the title, it's so Nirvana on acid
I just love this sweetie and I can see the feelings in it so well.
ly ♥
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