As we set your ashes free, into the sea
From the boat we stand with thee
Your mom and aunt standing togeather still
Away your ashes have flown in the wind
While we both stand watching them
Fly away into the sea
Where you are now set free
From all the pain, that you have seen
No more suffering you shall see
As we set you finally free
Even fron this urion, you were in
Until we were able to get you here
Where you wished to be set free
From the ashes we were made
As the dust you now must fly away
You are now in heaven above
God has taken you, into and under his wing's
Of his abideing and uncondicional love
Good-bye my Son and Nephew
Good-bye our friend as you are, our special one
Until we meet you up in heaven above
When our time on earth here is done
You"ll always be in our hearts
And in our minds, never apart we shall be
By: Brenda Gae Harper
June 25, 2008
Author notes
As your friend, I thought that it would be nice to write a poem for you. And let you know that I am here with and for you showing me how much I really care forand about thee !
A contest entry
- Help Me If You Can by stavykm.
900 points, ended June 27, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Can you feel the true passion and love from within?
Comments
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I think this was wonderfully written, Brenda! Filled with a lot of pain. This truly was worth your trophy that you won. It shows so much love one has for their loved ones. Also shows your pain that you have gone through, for without that your words would have not flowed so magically. In Love & Light... Blessed Be!
~~Shannon~~
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Beautiful
Oh this was beautiful and flowed so nicely. Thank you so much for your loving encouragement and sharing the unconditional love of God and Heaven. My brother died just this morning the one in the picture with my son. Oh it is so painful. It will take a few days to judge for I'm just so out of it. This poem really blessed my heart today for I'm grieving so deeply for my son but also for my brother. They are bother set free from the pains and stuggles of this earth but I will miss them terribly. Thank you for being my friend and best of luck in the contest which is going to be ridiculous to judge for all the poems are from everyones compassionate hearts.
Wishing You Many Blessings
Much Love
Kelle Marie
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