Tears do fall before your eyes
Fallen and beaten
I am Lucifer
Unable to rise to Heaven
I know you should have better
That a father should be strong
You shouldn't have to see me cry
You shouldn't have to see me cower
Are you of God?
Have I named you well?
Or will you be as human as your mother?
Will you be as human as your father?
I shall never know
For an angel took you from my arms
She believes I care for you not
She believes I am too much of a monster
So all I can say is good bye
Like I have done so many times before
Good bye, my sweet Dominic
I hope you never suffer the abyss my life has become
I hope that you find your Heaven and keep it
I'll never forget you...
Author notes
This is based on a recent happenings where my ange denied me from my life once again. However, she removed my son, Dominic, from my life as well, giving him to another family.
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Awww that's horrible! Some angel!
Hopefully, he is raised in a wonderful home filled with love and laughter.

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awwwwww how sad nic! This is a wonderful expression of your sorrow and pain.


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I absoutely loved it
This was amazing great job I am sorry to hear that
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Searra

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Sad Nic ...
I would kill if that happened to me (And I n'er say such lightly) It is a great peice of work , but so sad ... -DGG

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aww this is amazing and so sad.
i like the flow also and how you put all of your emotion inside of this poem.
I hope all is well
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this was so beauitful and emotion i really liked it but sorry for the happening.


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Oh Nic, I'm so sorry about all of this. I hate seeing you hurt. I loved this,
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that is so beautiful
very heartfelt i am very sorry for that

perfect backround for this


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