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Your Heaven, My Hell

Tears do fall before your eyes
Fallen and beaten
I am Lucifer
Unable to rise to Heaven

I know you should have better
That a father should be strong
You shouldn't have to see me cry
You shouldn't have to see me cower

Are you of God?
Have I named you well?
Or will you be as human as your mother?
Will you be as human as your father?

I shall never know
For an angel took you from my arms
She believes I care for you not
She believes I am too much of a monster

So all I can say is good bye
Like I have done so many times before
Good bye, my sweet Dominic
I hope you never suffer the abyss my life has become
I hope that you find your Heaven and keep it

I'll never forget you...

Author notes

This is based on a recent happenings where my ange denied me from my life once again. However, she removed my son, Dominic, from my life as well, giving him to another family.

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  • zhaniswolf
    February 26

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    Awww that's horrible! Some angel!

    Hopefully, he is raised in a wonderful home filled with love and laughter.


  • blueyez
    February 25

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    awwwwww how sad nic! This is a wonderful expression of your sorrow and pain.


  • DeathtoloveShade gold member
    February 14
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    I absoutely loved it

    This was amazing great job I am sorry to hear that s Searra


  • DraidenGunGiest
    October 22, 2008

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    Sad Nic ...

    I would kill if that happened to me (And I n'er say such lightly) It is a great peice of work , but so sad ... -DGG


  • LadyLuff
    August 11, 2008

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    aww this is amazing and so sad.
    i like the flow also and how you put all of your emotion inside of this poem.
    I hope all is well


  • FallenxAngelxMisfit
    June 27, 2008
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    this was so beauitful and emotion i really liked it but sorry for the happening.


  • FieryHollow
    June 26, 2008
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    Oh Nic, I'm so sorry about all of this. I hate seeing you hurt. I loved this,


  • RainDripsBlood
    June 25, 2008

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    that is so beautiful very heartfelt i am very sorry for that perfect backround for this

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