Many sleepless nights, credit these dark circles
My mind goes in and out, like a comatose patient
Maybe, I want to forget what I do remember
and run before I think of all other nightmares
Hopes and dreams of the pain inside fading in time
have all been swept out my mental corridor, where
joy and happiness once abounded, is a shell of what
little bit of life that was left behind from the trauma
A faint glimpse of light, pierces through my room, but
I shew it away, quickly, as it burns to feel any warmth
All I want to do is sleep the day, no, my life away and
not be troubled anymore, because I can't take it all
I wish I were locked up, in some hidden bottle, like
a lost Genie, away from my worries and sickness and
not have to hear what's good for me, since it seems
as though I can not think or speak for myself
Secluded in my room, shrouded by my cover in a pitch
black room, with no window, so no one can see my tears
and the world can just go fuck itself, because I am
dying in my emotional pain, that I never will escape from...
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by enitsirhC.
370 points, ended July 2, 2008, 13 entries
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wow this is really reallygood && intesnce.
i kno ow you feel.
life fucken suxz && i want to just leave this world so i can find a better place too.
i can relate this poem the most so far from ll ur poems.
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Thanks for entering my contest!
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WOW
This is a very powerful write. I enjoyed it. It made me realize that I am not the only one going through depression either. Wonderful. Keep up the great work.
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This was a deep and heart felt write. No one should have to be in pain like this.
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OMG-THIS ONE BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES, SO SORRY FOR YOUR
PAIN. WISH I COULD HELP, LOTS OF LOVE FOR YOU BABE
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