Drifting among her dreams
life seems so blissful
Happiness fills her soul
from deep within
Awaiting her warrior's return
dressed in her beautiful gown
Petals from beautiful roses
floating with her
As the air of love
sails her into his heart
Author notes
Please credit :lure the world by ~feimo
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie... by Angelflower.
600 points, ended June 26, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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as the air of love sails into her heart...sighs...the softest way of saying she is in love...happiness fills her from deep within and soft sweet petals floating on the wind...beautiful, thank you so much for sharing with me
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Thank you
Thank you so much. Floating on the air of love must be a beautiful feeling
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Bravo!!! you did a wodnerful job!! the imagery and flow was just so beautiful!! I love the story that you wrote here.. It was really soft and sweet.. Thank you very much for sharing.. Best of luck..I greatly enjoyed this..
Angel
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Thank you
Thank you so much for your encouraging words dear sister. Thank you for HM
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Nicely done. A warm and soft interpretation... Best of luck...
Ken
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Thank you
Thank you so much, Angel picked a hard picture to work with
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what a great write... you did good with this i just have nothing on this one.... thanks for sharing and goood luck..
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Thank you
Thank you this picture was very tough to work with
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