coming home, i see you waiting for me
you offer a playful smile and approach
kissing your lips, i whisper, "hush..."
you pull back, a little confused ~
"but i didn't say --" my finger to your lips
"hush, baby, hush..." i smile
you relax, leaning against the wall
lifting your hands over your head
giving me a look that melts my soul
our eyes meet, sheer intensity
i kiss you deeply, spinning you around
i see your steamy smile as you turn
facing the wall, head against your arms
body arched, causing your hips to rise
i join you from behind, pressing hard
my hands trace your body and you moan
"hush, sweetheart, hush..."
i nibble your earlobe as i whisper
moving your luscious red hair aside
i kiss the sweet spot on the back of your neck
you begin trembling, i know your weakness
my hands cup your breasts, playful touches
your hips move in rhythm to mine
heat becoming too intense for clothes
i reach for your skirt's hem, you stop me
"not yet," you whisper, "hush, lover"
turning in my arms, you press me to the wall
kissing me passionately with fire in your eyes
you drop to your knees and smile up at me
"it's my turn," you coy, "now hush"
Author notes
Hush - Deep Purple
http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w40/MidnightUniversal/Couples/Desire/coupleskissing.png
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A contest entry
- G-H Titles Contest! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended July 2, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Breathe Me In. by Poetryintheblood.
525 points, ended August 18, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Music Lovers For Poetry by Silver Asylum.
700 points, ended September 18, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Not So Hushed
Ahhhh...Deep Purple...good choice
I love how you make the roles change from beginning to end throughout your poem. The love and sensuality you put into this poem really makes it a wonderful read. The last stanza would have to be my favorite part of this write.
Well done and good luck in the contest
~*~Zenity
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Thank you for your beautifully spoken and sensual entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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This is beautiful Tim
Takes your reader on a beautiful intimate journey, full of the joy of sharing a deep and passionate love.
As always a pleasure.
Good Luck
~sugar~
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Very naughty indeed! Hot though, it's exactly what I'd like to do to him...shame he's not heeerrreee
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So sensual...so hot. "HUSH" very nice poem. Feels so tender yet so intense. Giving and taking and sharing loves gift. Blessed be!
Love~
Sue
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I am in awe and replaying this evening in my head and heart over and over again. A beautiful sexy write thats oh so real...I adore you Tim!
My lifetime of love,
~Lisa~
Psst. Glad i could inspire you!
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Well, Baby, we've had some rest, it's morning now...I can see you're still tired (but mmmmmm you look good in my shirt ~ and little else!), so how about we...Ohhh I see that look in your eyes
Ok, all you people watchin us: hush!
I love you Baby, yes: you are my inspiration.
Tim
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