Superman come save me
not only from the world
but from myself
only you can save me
there's no one else
to touch me the way you do
sending chills down my spine
or hearing your reassuring voice
telling me everything iz going to be fine
or da way you make my body tense
when you breathe against my skin
and the way our tongues meet
when my lips let you in
or when you bite me so hard
that it feels so damn good
or when I get mad and say "don't touch me!"
when I secretly wish you would
damn you scare me
because I asked for you and now you're here
and all of these unknown feelings
seem to appear
my Superman....
wat, how, and why
have you made me this way?
When you touch that spot
your name iz all I can manage to say
and when I pull away
its hard to let go
hard to conceal the fact that I loved you
even before you let me know
and am I worthy of such a man of steel?
That's why I pinch you to see if you're real.
when I feel your strong arms around me
I silently thank GOD you found me
Author notes
Yes...i'm quite smitten.lol
A contest entry
- About your bf/gf by AdamIzMi.
550 points, ended July 31, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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EXCELLENT!!!
Such a great poem.
Thank you for entering my contest.
Delila -
wow,great
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I'ma write a vice verca to this, I love it.
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awesome!! althought i dont know why in a great poem like this you would use internet and gang slang such as "dats" "da" and so forth. the poem would be a little bit better if you grammer and if you used proper english this poem would be alot better. but other than that this poem is very good! but really you should change that because really it isn't cool.
Wolf Loner
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