Ribbon of color, Godly creation,
after the storm sigh of elation.
Heavenly arch adorn the sky,
after the dark has passed by.
Warmth of colors shine in sun,
a lilac streak when rain is done.
Reddish hue for when God bled,
yellow for thorns upon His head.
Look to sky in awe and amaze,
rainbow appear neath sun's rays.
Splendor for one and all to share,
rainbow of love beyond compare.
God's paint pallet, lavender blues,
love and kindness in pastel hues.
Colorful rainbows bringing hope,
our Savior sends us love to cope.
In a list
A contest entry
- RAINBOW by Pisces rainbow.
1400 points, ended June 26, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Gorgeous description of the Rainbow, and of the meaning that may be found in one.
Well done, Sandy!
Brazos
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Wonderful Comment!!!!!!
Hello Brazos, I am so glad you enjoyed reading my poem. It was a pleasure to have you drop by and your comment was lovely. So many things can be seen in a rainbow. I guess it depends on the mood one is in. I tend to see hope after a stoem in ones life. Thank you for your very nice comment. Hugs and Smiles.
Take care,
Sandy
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it is interesting to note how rainbow evokes myriad imaginations in the poets....congrats on the trophy
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Thank You
I appreciate you stopping by and reading. You have a nice day.
Bless You,
Sandy
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MyGosh.
I never thought of a rainbow as this ... but I will from now on.
Just amazing and colourful and beautiful
Congrats on the Silver hun
♥
Stay safe
Love to you
~Manda
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Thank you Amanda.
Lovely comment. I am glad you enjoyed my poem. This was a fun one to write. Rainbows always bring hope and smiles. You take care sweet friend.
Bless You,
Sandy
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UPLIFTING
Awesome! You never cease to amaze me with your rhyming and talent. This piece is truly poetic in every sense of the word. It goes with the picture perfectly. My favorite line is of course the last two which remind me of Gods promise. Great job Sandy, and good luck in the contest.
Blessings on you today. Big Hugs my friend.
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What A Wonderful Comment
Good Morning Dan, Whast a pleasure to read your wonderful comment.I am so glad you enjoyed my write. Yes God gets me through many days lately. His love is amazing. I love rainbows too. They always bring us a smile and give us hope for a brighter day tomorrow. You take care dear friend. Big hugs and Smiles for you.
Blessings,
Sandy
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WOW
YOU MATCHED THIS TO THE BEAUTIFUL PICTURE
SOO PERFECTLY
VERY EXCITING READ
FOR ME,
I DO LOVE RAINBOWS
LOVE AND KINDNESS IN PASTEL HUES
OH PERFECT
THANK YOU FOR YOUR ENTRY
PLEASE DON'T REPLY TO MY COMMENT
TO KEEP CONTEST ANONYMOUS
GOD BLESS...
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Great Comment!!!
Your comment was lovely. Thank you for reading and thank you again for the Silver. You take care, Sandy
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God's touch is such a beautiful one. Rainbows, is the answer! Thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece. Good da
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Thank You
Good Morning. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hope all is well with you. You take care, Sandy
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Nice Poem Sandy
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Thank You Chuck
Good morning. It is always nice to have you drop by. Thank you for this nice comment. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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excellent
Warmth and colors.....seems to go on a riot in your write...well done..are you sure you intended finshinh the poem where you did actually finish it..I think it could be extend to double its size..the topic is such.....may god bless you for uploading this write for me to read it...trust you would come up with more..particularly completing sequel to this.I particularly,love following lines:
Warmth of colors shine in sun,
a lilac streak when rain is done.
Reddish hue for when God bled,
yellow for thorns upon His head.
this is clear writing about the concept .
You are definitly talented.
Pls visit some of my works.
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Great Comment
Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. I am glad you enjoyed reading it. I will have to think about a sequel. Maybe " After The Rainbow"
You take care, Sandy.
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i like how you used the colours, its like god is sitting up there with his own little paint pallet, painting our landscape, i liked this and the rhymn worked to sandy, best of luck to you in the contest
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Nice Comment
Good Morning, Thnk you for reading. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. You take care.
Bless You,
sandy
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This is warm and sweet. I like how you used the colours.
My favorite lines:
'Colorful rainbows bringing hope,
our Savior sends us love to cope.'
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Nice Comment
Thank you James. I appreciate you stopping by and leaving this nice comment. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Lovely piece here
I so enjoyed the read and such truth in this piece
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Good Morning
Thank you for stopping by and reading. I so appreciate it. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Excellent!
What a wonderful write you have penned!
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Nice Comment
Thank you for stopping by and reading. I appreciate your nice comment. You take care, Sandy
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BRAVO!
One of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. "Nuff said.
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Hi Kelle Marie
Your comment was so lovely and most appreciated. Thank you for stopping by. It is always a pleasure when you do. Take care.
Blessings,
Sandy
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Hi Jaime!!!
Thank you. Your words are always so encouraging. Thank you for that. You take care, Sandy
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This is gorgeous. Very well written. I love the imagery throughout. Your picture is beautiful. I hope it does well in the contest. Good luck.
Kelli
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