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in just soliloquies

A favoured life of sixty years
A unison  of thirty five years
A sweet home built for our sake
oh! my beloved! leave not me for God's sake


A fragrance waved with two flowers
suddenly smelt the taste of death
leaving us once again as two,inseparable
Let us not sail the boat individually, for GOD'S sake

Seasons do change alternately
but let us, for God's sake
not adopt it in curiosity
abort not our wedded dreams my dear!

Though it is all, a way of life
yet let our sweetly sailing boat
not sink and do make us depart
and leave us alone to inundate in just  soliloquies

please remember ! awake and arise!!
united we stand divided we fall

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for God sake...

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 29, 2008

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    what a beautiful concept of the depth and the tender is built in the words here....I like this piece......thanks for sharing it..