prismatic glory
strikes wonder anew -
colours beyond ken
surpass vision’s grasp
- - - translucent - - -
spectral arch
hugs intended -
seeking terminus in vain
we remain captivated
central to it’s promise
- - - to the end - - -
above apprehension
beyond touch
pristine
- - - true - - -
Author notes
The rainbow
A contest entry
- RAINBOW by Pisces rainbow.
1400 points, ended June 26, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I love constructive criticism
Comments
1 - 9 of 9
-
Congratulations On The Gold
This was such an uplifting poem to read this morning. It so deserved to be the winner. Thank you for sharing. This was a pleasure to read this morning. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
-
-
thanks for the encouragement
james
-
-
THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR COLORFUL AND LOVELY ENTRIES,I TRUELY ENJOYED ALL OF THEN,AGAIN THANK YOU FOR ENTERING AND GOD BLESS
-
-
thank you much
-
-
I LOVE YOUR STYLE
VERY DEEP
MY BELIEFS EXACTLY
VERY CONNECTED TO THIS
EXCELLENT!
THANK YOU FOR YOUR ENTRY
PLEASE DON'T REPLY TO COMMENT
TO KEEP CONTEST ANONYMOUS
GOD BLESS...
-
nice job - I could see it in my mind
-
-
thanks
-
-
Indeed it is
For the eye to see the prismatic glory is heavenly indeed
-
-
thanks for the comment
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 9 of 9
