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Francine's Collection #6

 

 

 

 

Dearest Paper,                                                                                           November 25, 1848

 

 

     Thomas was his name. My lover of roof-tops & steamy sex in the rain; I rather

miss his way. I think it's mother who has caused this ache. I cannot seem to just let

them love me. I always wanna run the other way. Mother always said I wasn't too pretty;that boys didn't like plain.

 

     She is at another meeting. She'll be home soon. I didn't want to go again. Not this time.

I am dog-tired of the ladies yacking about who will make the cake, after church

next Sun-day; I don't want any cake.

 

I want Thomas & roof-tops & steamy sex in the rain.

 

 

      

 

                                                                                                       Love, Francine

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  • adsaige gold member
    July 3

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    i like this piece, but i am
    rather bias and enjoy the 9th(?)
    one. i must say, usually i am
    fond of the "&" but not in this
    particular case with this woman
    and the almost formal writing of
    these letters.

  • Nicolette gold member
    June 30

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    Love the way that last line stands there and makes a statement; loved the straight-forward honesty of it. Nope, not too much, Trina - just right!! I'm starting to really enjoy the Francine collection

    ~ Nicolette


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    June 25
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    And I want more Francine Again you breathe her life. Love, C


    • Faithbound gold member
      June 25
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      I love you for the name. Well, for more than that, but you know what I mean.
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