Yield to love
realizing, what's perfect for us
may not conform
to our mental constructs...
Love forsaken may not return~
Author notes
Sometimes we hold on to a fantasy, and any chance for real love slips away... Love must be given every opportunity to grow how and when it presents itself. Not forced into unrealistic expectations... that end up hurting ourselves and others.
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A stunning piece that holds a lot of truth to it. Some do like to bury thier head then seem shocked when things turn out differently. An awesome write, superbly penned
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Wonderful
So full of truths and reflections that come in difficult times. Thank you for sharing.
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We keep the things we are afraid of at bay by pretending we know already. Then, how can we ever find out? Passion is a hot sword that slices through the constructs and banishes fear, leaving us naked in our innocence and joyous in our love.
Love, Tom B.
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Beautiful words of wisdom. Love is universal, but the silver cups that we tend to gather its essence in, are often tainted. A beautiful writ and an enjoyable read. Best wishes in the comp
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"Love unyielded my never return" how wise are those words.. A great quote you should keep and post on your authors page. A great 20 words. Nice piece of short poetry. Good luck.
Kelli
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Lovely.
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