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God's Life

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Rainbows - red, yellow

brown, black and white the colors of

the human race, God’s life.

 

 

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  • sassykitty
    July 5, 2008
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    Simple yet so effective, this sums up what humanity should be all about. Your use of language is thoughtful and I do like the basic message and imagery that this portrays. Thanks for sharing such a thought provoking poem that everyone should understand. Keep up the good work and keep writing.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    WITH SO FEW WORDS YOU HAVE SAID SO MUCH

    VERY LOVELY

    YOUR PICTURES IS ALSO LOVELY

    THANK YOU FOR YOUR ENTRY

    PLEASE DON'T REPLY TO COMMENT

    TO KEEP THE CONTEST ANONYMOUS.

    GOD BLESS...

  • PianoMan
    June 25, 2008

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    I'm new to this site, so I'm still trying to get the hang of commenting on poems. I wish everybody would be able to view everyone else equally no matter what God has created them to look like. Its nice to find someone else from NY.


  • crazymomma
    June 25, 2008

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    I wish more people saw others this way. I am white and date a hispanic which has caused a lot of turmoil in my life but we love eachother and that is all that matters. Lovely poem


  • Kelli Marie
    June 25, 2008

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    I think this is a great take on a rainbow. Very well written with a great message. Good luck in the contest.
    Kelli

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