Rainbows - red, yellow
brown, black and white the colors of
the human race, God’s life.
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A contest entry
- RAINBOW by Pisces rainbow.
1400 points, ended June 26, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Simple yet so effective, this sums up what humanity should be all about. Your use of language is thoughtful and I do like the basic message and imagery that this portrays. Thanks for sharing such a thought provoking poem that everyone should understand. Keep up the good work and keep writing.
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WITH SO FEW WORDS YOU HAVE SAID SO MUCH
VERY LOVELY
YOUR PICTURES IS ALSO LOVELY
THANK YOU FOR YOUR ENTRY
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I'm new to this site, so I'm still trying to get the hang of commenting on poems.
I wish everybody would be able to view everyone else equally no matter what God has created them to look like. Its nice to find someone else from NY.
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I wish more people saw others this way. I am white and date a hispanic which has caused a lot of turmoil in my life but we love eachother and that is all that matters. Lovely poem
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I think this is a great take on a rainbow. Very well written with a great message. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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